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Still a "Work in Progress"

Just thought I'd share what I'm up to so far with my idea for this pegasus, :-). I hope you like, :-). Any advice is always welcome, :hug:

** Update **

Woots!!!! I actually kinda like how it turned out, lmao. I did change my mind about the color of the mane and tail, lol. Once I had it all done and I looked at it, it was just too much green, lmao. I love the brown better, :-). I hope you guys like too!

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:icontoshema:
First off, I love the idea behind the idea of the design and the elements you placed to surrport that, Like the wings for example. However there are a few details that can be fixed, like the eye. The eye's placement is to far forward and should be more towards the cheek. Also the horses eye should be parallel to the head position. Furthermore the inner back leg should be moved more to the right, so the horse doesn't look like it trapping. One other thing is that even though you don't have a background you should at least have a directional source of lighting instead of an undefined and inconstant lighting. The wings need fixing too, I think with more structure and making them big enough to carry the horses weight when he flys they will be perfect. I recommend you use a reference for the wings. But, overall the artist does show a good command over horse anatomy, and has nice movement going though the figure of the horse. I also enjoyed the pic and can't wait to see the finished product. Keep it up :thumbsup: !!!!
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:icondolphin-dreamer:
I'd try add twigs to the wings if I were you.
A texture to the body maybe a grassy one.

Just my idea but its looking good so far

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:iconpantherhawk4441:
I love ~dolphin-dreamer's idea! But the wings look amazingly amazing either way :3 Love it so far

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:iconcandrence:
I love that idea!! I didn't know what was looking wrong with the wings and I didn't like how the leaves covered so much of the "skeleton" of branches, lol. And I'll see what I can do about the body, lol

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:iconcandrence:
Hehehe, I like the idea too and I'll be trying it here soon, but I'm glad that you still like them so far, :-)

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"The world is but a canvas to the imagination."
~Henry David Thoreau

"Ughhhhh, I have never seen so much damn whine, and I work at a freaking liquor store!!!"
~ ME ~
:iconskysmoke:
oooh. another spiffy one! hmm..something to make the wings look more solid....
spider web-ish things? i dunno, i'm bad ad advice.
I think streaks of brown would look good in the mand and tail too :D
:icondolphin-dreamer:
Can't wait to see it ^^

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I may be schizophrenic,
But at least I have each other.
:iconcandrence:
:-) :heart: Just updated, lol

--
"The world is but a canvas to the imagination."
~Henry David Thoreau

"Ughhhhh, I have never seen so much damn whine, and I work at a freaking liquor store!!!"
~ ME ~
:icondolphin-dreamer:
I love what you've done with the update!

The eye is very bright and makes it look gentle XD

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I may be schizophrenic,
But at least I have each other.
:icondolphin-dreamer:
I could tell I had checked my DA a few minutes ago (I'm such an addict even more so on here than on Howrse but I have been here longer )

Can't wait to see the finished product.

Reckon you could draw up a tutorial at some stage on how to draw horsies?
Don't need to but it would be epic XDD

--
I may be schizophrenic,
But at least I have each other.

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